SD-217
[voice-grounded-rewrite] Voice-grounded blog rewrite. Exhaustive extraction of Captain verbatim text across 20 repo sources (~8,000 words). Grounded thematic analysis identified 8 voice themes: nested parenthetical thought, profanity as structural emphasis, self-deprecation followed by doubling down, lowercase defaults, ellipses as thinking pauses, short declarative conclusions, British English, honest admission. Cross-analysed all 5 posts — every one read like “an agent wrote it and a human approved it.” Removed: epistemic theatre, listicle structure, section-header ceremony, “Welcome to…” introductions, bold concept name ceremonies, emoji/puns, numbered lesson lists. Rewrote in continuous prose, natural register, flat structure. +453/-1,226 lines. Captain’s verdict: “soft pass for now.” Human eyes remain the final gate on all blog content (standing order from SD-210).
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